http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/2010/02/descriptive-overkill/ on young adult books Thu, 09 Feb 2012 12:44:29 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/2010/02/descriptive-overkill/#comment-919 Book Chook Sat, 27 Feb 2010 03:21:00 +0000 http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/?p=1805#comment-919 Good point! And that dessert sentence changed the rhythm of the words, added variety to the structure too. .-= Book Chook´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/TheBookChook/~3/MmAmx6cVjug/letter-to-book-chook-free-reading.html" rel="nofollow">Letter to the Book Chook - Free Reading Material</a> =-. Good point! And that dessert sentence changed the rhythm of the words, added variety to the structure too.
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]]> http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/2010/02/descriptive-overkill/#comment-910 Whispers of Dawn ~ | Ye Olde Blog wherein Sally Apokedak opines Fri, 26 Feb 2010 12:04:09 +0000 http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/?p=1805#comment-910 [...] Descriptive Overkill [...] [...] Descriptive Overkill [...]

]]> http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/2010/02/descriptive-overkill/#comment-907 Whispers of Dawn ~ | Ye Olde Blog wherein Sally Apokedak opines Wed, 24 Feb 2010 20:32:53 +0000 http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/?p=1805#comment-907 [...] A couple of weeks ago, I wrote a quick paragraph showing a table full of food. The food was all of the normal variety, though. There were  no killer details to make the setting stand out in the reader’s mind. [...] [...] A couple of weeks ago, I wrote a quick paragraph showing a table full of food. The food was all of the normal variety, though. There were  no killer details to make the setting stand out in the reader’s mind. [...]

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